修改一下作文,高一english is a language which can be used all over the world.and it is also a subject in our school lives.more students than a half said that it is important for them to learn english,because they thought english is very intere

修改一下作文,高一english is a language which can be used all over the world.and it is also a subject in our school lives.more students than a half said that it is important for them to learn english,because they thought english is very intere
修改一下作文,高一
english is a language which can be used all over the world.and it is also a subject in our school lives.more students than a half said that it is important for them to learn english,because they thought english is very interesting and useful.but the other students did not think so,they thought english is very hard and they thought we were chinese,so we did not have to learn english.in my opening,english is very udeful,it will be an important part in our lives.for example,if we should travel to the other countries,we should use english;if we should business with foreign men we should use english;if we shuold communicate with foreign people,we also shuold use english,so it is not only a subject,but also a briage,we walk to the other sade,and walk to the english spoken countries,walk to all over the world.
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修改一下作文,高一english is a language which can be used all over the world.and it is also a subject in our school lives.more students than a half said that it is important for them to learn english,because they thought english is very intere
语言叙述讲究的是不要拖泥带水,作文也是这样：
English is a language being used all over the world,and it is also a subject in our school.Over half of the students say that it is important to learn English well,because they feel it very interesting and useful.Some others don't think so,however.They say that English is very hard and that we Chinese people don't have to learn it.In my opinion,English is very useful,and it will play an important role in our lives.For example,when we travel in other countries or make businesses with foreign people,we will have to use English.It is natural that English becomes very important when we communicate with foreign people.Therefore,English is not only a subject,but it is also a bridge which connects the people all over the world.