作业帮帮我看看这段话有没有病句 英语的 Jim is my good friend.He is the same as me!We both like sports and we are both outgoing.But now he is weak.Because he is stressed out for study.He is stressed out when the test come.I want to help him.I
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帮我看看这段话有没有病句 英语的 Jim is my good friend.He is the same as me!We both like sports and we are both outgoing.But now he is weak.Because he is stressed out for study.He is stressed out when the test come.I want to help him.I
帮我看看这段话有没有病句 英语的
Jim is my good friend.He is the same as me!We both like sports and we are both outgoing.But now he is weak.Because he is stressed out for study.He is stressed out when the test come.I want to help him.I am talking with him when he is stressed out.And I want to listen to music with him.Although I will help him to study better!I think he can get a good grade and never stressed out.
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帮我看看这段话有没有病句 英语的 Jim is my good friend.He is the same as me!We both like sports and we are both outgoing.But now he is weak.Because he is stressed out for study.He is stressed out when the test come.I want to help him.I
He is the same as me应该改成we have a lot in common.
不要but.Now he is weak,because he is stressed out for studying since the test is coming soon.
I talk to him when he is stressed out and I want to listen to music with him.
I think he can get a good grade without getting stressed out.
oh...my
第二句最好改成both he and i like sports.
weak指身体虚弱的，在这里好像不太好，改成ill吧
第五句应该是他饱受学习压力之苦改成he is suffered from stress
下面一句改成he worries about the coming test
第八句改成i talk with him when he is worried,...
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第二句最好改成both he and i like sports.
weak指身体虚弱的，在这里好像不太好，改成ill吧
第五句应该是他饱受学习压力之苦改成he is suffered from stress
下面一句改成he worries about the coming test
第八句改成i talk with him when he is worried,这里不用现在进行时
倒数第二句although省去
最后一句never stressed out有点多余
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