作业帮是关于电影《录取通知书》（Accepted）的,大家看看有没有什么语病,或者哪些地方可以改成更出彩的表述.但不要提什么重写之类的建议. Review on Accepte
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是关于电影《录取通知书》（Accepted）的,大家看看有没有什么语病,或者哪些地方可以改成更出彩的表述.但不要提什么重写之类的建议. Review on Accepte
是关于电影《录取通知书》（Accepted）的,大家看看有没有什么语病,或者哪些地方可以改成更出彩的表述.但不要提什么重写之类的建议.
Review on Accepted
The movie Accepted is filled with humor andinspiration,but at the same time,it reflects some defects in the currenteducation system,which induces us to rethink bearings of our education.
What do you think when you hear a student,rejected by many colleges,want to establish a university by himself?At leastfor me,this crazy idea in Bartleby Gaines’s brain seems ridiculous and evenironic.But the final success of this idea implies that in some circumstances,we can’t succeed just because we lack courage to imagine.In fact,we don’tknow what we can do until we have an idea (even it seems stupid) and try it.Justas Victor Hugo said,“idea is everything”.In a word,having an idea is thefirst step and foundation of our success whatever we do.
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是关于电影《录取通知书》（Accepted）的,大家看看有没有什么语病,或者哪些地方可以改成更出彩的表述.但不要提什么重写之类的建议. Review on Accepte
attaches greater importance to getting good grades than to simulating creativity.
value creativity rather than grades.
it's time for our education system to (advocate?不太好吧?)
provides us a fresth point of view.and leads us to think, not just attracts eyes with grand scenes.
That's all I could find.
We are the SHIT heads now, and none of what you stamp or sign or do will take that away. So go!