跪寻英语强人.帮忙看看小弟这短文语法错没.my summer holidayToday,I'm going to the TONGXIANG .It's beautiful,i like it.Here is cold,so l'm putting on my clothes.After,i'm feeling warm.For lunch,i'm eating rice,fish,vegetables and soup

跪寻英语强人.帮忙看看小弟这短文语法错没.my summer holidayToday,I'm going to the TONGXIANG .It's beautiful,i like it.Here is cold,so l'm putting on my clothes.After,i'm feeling warm.For lunch,i'm eating rice,fish,vegetables and soup
跪寻英语强人.帮忙看看小弟这短文语法错没.
my summer holiday
Today,I'm going to the TONGXIANG .It's beautiful,i like it.Here is cold,so l'm putting on my clothes.After,i'm feeling warm.For lunch,i'm eating rice,fish,vegetables and soup.I think what food is delicious.Because l like eating sweet.My parents think what people are good to them.I think so.Yuck!I'm not feeling well,i have a sore throut.I think i have a cold...
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跪寻英语强人.帮忙看看小弟这短文语法错没.my summer holidayToday,I'm going to the TONGXIANG .It's beautiful,i like it.Here is cold,so l'm putting on my clothes.After,i'm feeling warm.For lunch,i'm eating rice,fish,vegetables and soup
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my summer holiday
Today,(I'm going to) I arrived in (the) TONGXIANG(这个TONGXIANG是什么?地名?) .The city is（It's如果TONGXIANG是地名就这么改） beautiful,I like it.
Tt（Here） was（is） cold today,so I wore（l'm putting on）my coat （my clothes clothes- -你也不可能是裸奔去的啊）.So,（After,）I did not feel cold today( i'm feeling warm).For lunch,I (i'm) had(eating )rice,fish,vegetables and soup.I think the(what 为啥用what?) food is delicious.（Because l like eating sweet.孩子.米饭

Today, I'm going to （为什么用进行时，可以用一般现代时，或过去时）the TONGXIANG .It's beautiful, i like it. Here is cold（这句表达有问题）,so l'm putting （还是时态不对）on my clothes. After, i'm feeling warm（还是时态不对）. For lunch, i'm eating ...

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Today, I'm going to （为什么用进行时，可以用一般现代时，或过去时）the TONGXIANG .It's beautiful, i like it. Here is cold（这句表达有问题）,so l'm putting （还是时态不对）on my clothes. After, i'm feeling warm（还是时态不对）. For lunch, i'm eating rice（还是时态不对）,fish,vegetables and soup. I think what food is delicious（这句是想说什么？表达不对，可以用wonder）. Becausel like eating sweet. My parents think what people are good to them.（这句表达也有问题，不知道你父母说的什么） I think so. Yuck! I'm not feeling well, i have a sore throut. I think i have a cold...
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写以前的事，最好全用过去时

my summer holiday
Today, I went to TONGXIANG. It's beautiful, and i like it. It was cold here, so l wore my thick clothes. After that, i felt warm. For lunch, I had rice,fish,vegetables and soup...

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my summer holiday
Today, I went to TONGXIANG. It's beautiful, and i like it. It was cold here, so l wore my thick clothes. After that, i felt warm. For lunch, I had rice,fish,vegetables and soup. I was wondering what kind of food is delicious, because l like eating sweet foods. But my parents insist on what is good to people. I think so. Yuck! I'm not feeling well, i have a sore throat. I think i have a cold...
Help me! I don't want to see the d

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迟芳丽 改的不对 today要用现在进行时