修改一篇英语文章2010 expo is successed.It is hosted by China.People from all the country have celebrated this great events.This expo brings me a lot.First,I`m fascnated by different cultures all over the world.Because all the pavilions have b

修改一篇英语文章2010 expo is successed.It is hosted by China.People from all the country have celebrated this great events.This expo brings me a lot.First,I`m fascnated by different cultures all over the world.Because all the pavilions have b
修改一篇英语文章
2010 expo is successed.It is hosted by China.People from all the country have celebrated this great events.
This expo brings me a lot.
First,I`m fascnated by different cultures all over the world.Because all the pavilions have been dseigned by different country with there own features.
Second,I have direct experience about different civilization.
It gives me a further understanding about world.
Third,It makes me raelize how important English is.Because exchange ideas with people from other parts of the world in English.
Fourth,I get to realize it is very important for us to protect in environment.Because only if we have better environment can we have the better city and better life.
On the home,this Expo brings me a lot.
That`s all.Thank you.
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修改一篇英语文章2010 expo is successed.It is hosted by China.People from all the country have celebrated this great events.This expo brings me a lot.First,I`m fascnated by different cultures all over the world.Because all the pavilions have b
2010 expo is successful. It is hosted by China.People from all countries have celebrated this great event.
This expo brings me a lot.
Firstly,I`m fascnated by different cultures all over the world.Because all the pavilions have been dseigned by different countries with there own features.
Secondly,I have direct experiences about different civilizations.
It gives me a further understanding about the world.
Thirdly,It makes me raelize how important English is. because of exchanging ideas with people from other parts of the world in English.
Fourthly,I get to realize it is very important for us to protect environment.because only if we have better environment can we have the better city and better life.
On the whole,this Expo brings me a lot.
That`s all.Thank you.

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