求英语大师 帮帮小弟我改改作文吧AN important changechange is important for us,I has an important change in three years, I choosed to playing the piano , I wished to become a musician but my home was poor. IT couldn't let me to afford p

求英语大师 帮帮小弟我改改作文吧AN important changechange is important for us,I has an important change in three years, I choosed to playing the piano , I wished to become a musician but my home was poor. IT couldn't let me to afford p
求英语大师 帮帮小弟我改改作文吧
AN important change
change is important for us,I has an important change in three years, I choosed to playing the piano , I wished to become a musician but my home was poor. IT couldn't let me to afford piano. I deponded on harding study.More and more quickly over time.my home also become have wealth. beause I harded sudy.I had my own piano .I was look happy . I thingk of the change that make me old is importangt
This is one of my very important change

求英语大师 帮帮小弟我改改作文吧AN important changechange is important for us,I has an important change in three years, I choosed to playing the piano , I wished to become a musician but my home was poor. IT couldn't let me to afford p
An Important Change
Change is important for us,I had an important change in three years ago, I choosed to play the piano , I wished to became a musician but my family was poor. So that couldn't let me to afford piano. I deponded on harding study.More and more quickly over time.my family also became had wealth, beause I harded sudy.I had my own piano now .I was very happy . I thingk of the change that make me important.
This is my important change.
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Change is important for us. I remember three years ago, I needed to change myself from a pianist to a normal student because my house was too poor to afford my piano studying. I studied really hard. W...

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Change is important for us. I remember three years ago, I needed to change myself from a pianist to a normal student because my house was too poor to afford my piano studying. I studied really hard. With the time passing by, my family has become wealthy again because of my hard studying. Now I can own my own piano with a happy life. I think this huge change three years ago has made me more mature, and I believe that it was one of the mot important change in my life.

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