请问这篇高三英语短文能得多少分?实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于言表,更要学会倾听.请你根据下表中所提供的信息,写一篇题为Being a Good Listener的英文演讲稿.为何倾听 表

请问这篇高三英语短文能得多少分?实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于言表,更要学会倾听.请你根据下表中所提供的信息,写一篇题为Being a Good Listener的英文演讲稿.为何倾听 表
请问这篇高三英语短文能得多少分?
实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于言表,更要学会倾听.请你根据下表中所提供的信息,写一篇题为Being a Good Listener的英文演讲稿.
为何倾听
表示尊重,增进理解,建立良好的人际关系
谁来倾听
家长倾听孩子
理解孩子,消除代沟,……
老师倾听学生
了解学生,满足需求,……
同学相互倾听
增进友谊,互帮互学,……
怎样倾听
（请考生联系自己拟定内容,列举两至三点.） 　　注意：1、对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译.　　2、词数150左右.开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数.　　3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名.　　Good afternoon,everyone!　　The topic of my speech today is Being a Good Listener.　　__________________________________________________________________
i think it is important that we should listen to each other,the reason is it is the better a way we can understand each other well,building our society relation,and it is essential value for each other.
first of a question is who should be the listener.
i think first a kind of listener should be the family,i suggest that every family should listen to their children what they need ,which can remove misunderstand of each other,make family understand what is their children's idea.
next ,i wish the teachers could listen to their students what trouble they meet,giving them some help .
the last of my suggestion is that every students should listen to their classmates,which will enable them to develop their friendship,and learn some good quality from each other.
so,i think it is necessary for we to listen to each other.
the method of how to listen to each other well is that listener should focus their all attention on listening to each other
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Thank you for your listening!

请问这篇高三英语短文能得多少分?实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于言表,更要学会倾听.请你根据下表中所提供的信息,写一篇题为Being a Good Listener的英文演讲稿.为何倾听 表
最多十五分.因为句子里有很多错误.the reason is （that）it is the (the-a)better a (a去掉)way we can . building（build） our society relation
every family should listen to their children (to know)what they need ,which can remove misunderstand of(between) each other,
the teachers could listen to their students (to know)what trouble they meet,giving(give) them some help
i think it is necessary for we(we-us) to listen to each other
how to listen to each other well is that listener(listeners) should focus their all (their all- all their)attention on listening to each other