大家来评评我这篇英语日记!What a happy day today.I went to the mountains.It was very sun.I think of mountain was fun.Then I visited museum.It was very interesting.Ithink of my day is fun.

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大家来评评我这篇英语日记!What a happy day today.I went to the mountains.It was very sun.I think of mountain was fun.Then I visited museum.It was very interesting.Ithink of my day is fun.
大家来评评我这篇英语日记!
What a happy day today.
I went to the mountains.It was very sun.
I think of mountain was fun.
Then I visited museum.It was very interesting.
Ithink of my day is fun.

大家来评评我这篇英语日记!What a happy day today.I went to the mountains.It was very sun.I think of mountain was fun.Then I visited museum.It was very interesting.Ithink of my day is fun.
第一句没问题加感叹号
第二句 very sunny very后面跟形容词
第三句think 用过去时thought 把 of去掉
第四局将museum前加个a 或者the
最后一句： I thought today of mine is funny.
老外听得懂
但是错误真多...
2楼您这是害人家
恶心不
为分而答题

我说你好，你给我分吗？
好，非常好。Pretty Good.
It's the best daily I have ever seen...

第一句用感叹号，第二句用sunny,第三句把to去掉，第四局museum前面+a,第四句改为I think today is fun.你是不是用的翻译软件啊？

1."."改为“！”
2.“sun”改为“sunny”
3.没错
4.“museum”改为“museums”
5.没错

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