If one day I have died perhaps vanishes suddenlyCan some people think me perhaps seeks me anxiously?英语 句子 看下有无语法错误 可以翻译出一点诗意么?

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If one day I have died perhaps vanishes suddenlyCan some people think me perhaps seeks me anxiously?英语 句子 看下有无语法错误 可以翻译出一点诗意么?

If one day I have died perhaps vanishes suddenlyCan some people think me perhaps seeks me anxiously?英语 句子 看下有无语法错误 可以翻译出一点诗意么?
If one day
I have died perhaps vanishes suddenly
Can some people think me perhaps seeks me anxiously?
英语 句子 看下有无语法错误
可以翻译出一点诗意么?

If one day I have died perhaps vanishes suddenlyCan some people think me perhaps seeks me anxiously?英语 句子 看下有无语法错误 可以翻译出一点诗意么?
If one day
I died
or vanished suddenly
will someone miss me
and seek me anxiously?
有一天
我死去了
或是突然消逝了
是否会有人
因想念
而苦苦寻找我

如果有一天
我辞别了这人世
抑或消遁而去
又有谁
会心焦如焚的思念、找寻?
这个句子很怪,但语法错误谈不上。
诗意的话,最多这样了吧
我尽力了......

a改成这样
If one day
I have died perhaps vanish suddenly
Can some people think of me perhaps seeks me anxiously?

改正:
If I die or vanish suddenly one day, will someone miss or seek me anxiously?
如果我有一天突然死亡或消失,会有人焦急的思念或者寻找我吗?

perhaps一般放句首, suddenly后面的主语呢?
can 后面没动原,太多了