请英文好的朋友帮助纠正一下英文作文的错误.Urbanisation led to an increase inconsumption of the higher population,this resulted in a rising demand fornatural resources which requires land use change.This change have contributedto th

请英文好的朋友帮助纠正一下英文作文的错误.Urbanisation led to an increase inconsumption of the higher population,this resulted in a rising demand fornatural resources which requires land use change.This change have contributedto th
请英文好的朋友帮助纠正一下英文作文的错误.
Urbanisation led to an increase inconsumption of the higher population,this resulted in a rising demand fornatural resources which requires land use change.This change have contributedto the loss of habitat and damage the ecosystem.
For example,because the rising demand formeat in city,tropical forests in Tabasco were razed.Also,rising demand forsoybeans and meat in urban led to accelerating deforestation in the Brazilian.
Expansion of the city results in theincrease of demand of freshwater resources and this increased the contradictionbetween the demands on fresh water and the demands of agriculture.South-to-North Water Diversion in China is such an extreme example of this contradiction.

请英文好的朋友帮助纠正一下英文作文的错误.Urbanisation led to an increase inconsumption of the higher population,this resulted in a rising demand fornatural resources which requires land use change.This change have contributedto th
Urbanisation resulted in an increase inconsumption of the higher population,and a rising demand for natural resources which requires land-use change.This change have contributed to the loss of habitat and damage of the ecosystem.
For example,because of the rising demand formeat in city,tropical forests in Tabasco were razed.Also,rising demand for soybeans and meat in urban led to accelerating deforestation in the Brazilian.
Expansion of the city caused the increase of demand of freshwater resources,which increased the contradiction between the demands on fresh water and agriculture.South-to-North Water Diversion in China is such an extreme example of this contradiction.
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Urbanisation led to an increase in (resource) consumption of (by) the(去掉) higher (larger) population, this(which) resulted in a rising demand for natural resources which requires land use change. This...

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Urbanisation led to an increase in (resource) consumption of (by) the(去掉) higher (larger) population, this(which) resulted in a rising demand for natural resources which requires land use change. This change have(has) contributed to the loss of habitat and damage (for) the ecosystem.
For example, because (of) the rising demand for meat in city, tropical forests in Tabasco were razed. Also, rising demand for soy beans and meat in urban led to accelerating deforestation in the Brazilian.
Expansion of the city results(resulted) in the increase of demand of(for) freshwater resources and this increased(tensed) the contradiction between the demands on(for) fresh water and the demands of (for) agriculture.South-to-North Water Diversion in China is such an extreme example of this contradiction.

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