英语翻译Today when I enter this forum,a strang idea suggests itself.Can I write an article in English?With a bit nervous ,thinking for a while,I decide to write it down.This is my first attempt,so I know there are a lot of mistakes in it.I wish e

英语翻译Today when I enter this forum,a strang idea suggests itself.Can I write an article in English?With a bit nervous ,thinking for a while,I decide to write it down.This is my first attempt,so I know there are a lot of mistakes in it.I wish e
英语翻译
Today when I enter this forum,a strang idea suggests itself.Can I write an article in English?With a bit nervous ,thinking for a while,I decide to write it down.This is my first attempt,so I know there are a lot of mistakes in it.I wish everyong present can help me point them out.Thank you
When I was a primary school student,I used to play table tennis.When I entered Junior middle scool,I fell in love with football.But from the bottom of my heart I knew they were not my favourite.When I became a Senior middle school student,basketball came into my world quietly.And I felt strongly that I would keep this hobby all my life long.Just on account of him ,Tracy,a gifted basketball player.
His eyes are so attractive that I almost loved him at the first sight.I remembered the first time I saw him happened to be Tracys showtime,which was known as "the time of Tracy McGrady"At that time,I had no idea about scoring 13 points in 35 seconds.But my classmates told me that it was nearly a task that couldnt be finished.I was a bit amazed then.From then on,I began to pay more attention to him.Gradually,I found he was really a perfect player.He showed consummate skill in playing basketball.He made his team united.He was among the best players,but he didnt have the bad characters of other players.
Because of this,he became the God in my heart.He brought me a lot of dreams.I expected him to win the World Champion and get the ring he had been searching for 8 years.But after the first round playoffs,after Houston Rockets was defeated by Dallas Mavericks by 40 points,after Tracy piping his eyes,I found all my dreams in the air,never to be realized.I fell into great sorrow.But soon I became clear-hearted.I knew it was not easy to win the World Champion.It needed time and opportunity.But I believed firmly that he would come back as he said,showing a new Tracy.
He is a ambitious player.His dream is to fly in the hall of basketball,talking with the ever best players.He has been flying to his goal.During his flying,he shows a fascinated secenery,making we fans screaming.But we really want to fly with him and help him as much as we can.But we cant.The only thing we can do is back up him in the other side of the world.But our hearts are always companying him.
Im waiting for his coming back.Im looking forward to seeing a stronger Tracy eagerly

英语翻译Today when I enter this forum,a strang idea suggests itself.Can I write an article in English?With a bit nervous ,thinking for a while,I decide to write it down.This is my first attempt,so I know there are a lot of mistakes in it.I wish e
当我打开这个论坛的时候,一个强烈的念头驱使着我.我可以用英语写个文章吗带着点紧张思考了一会,我决定把它写下来.这是我的第一次尝试.所以我知道会有些错误的地方.希望所有人帮我指出来,谢谢!
当我还是小学生的时候,我经常打台球,当我进入Junior中学 我从心底爱上了足球 但是我知道这不是我的最爱 当我成为一个高中生的时候 篮球来到了我的世界 我强烈的感觉我会一直喜欢篮球的 当我听说 特雷西 一个天才的运动员
他的眼睛是那么的有吸引力 我几乎在第一时间就爱上他了 我记得我第一次看他是在电视上看到 麦蒂时刻 的时候 那是所有的人都知道他 我没有一点35秒13分的概念 但是我的同学告诉我这是几乎无法完成的奇迹 我十分惊讶 然后 我开始关注他 麦克格雷迪 我发现他真是一个完美的篮球运动员 在打球时 他表现了他精湛的技巧 他使他所在的球队更加牛逼 他是最好的NBA球员之一 但是他没有其他队员身上的坏坏的纹身
正因为如此 他成了我脑海里的上帝 他给我带来了很多的想象 我期盼他能赢到NBA总冠军戒指 他8年没有突破季后赛第一轮 当火箭队被小牛队赢了40分时 麦蒂捂住了他的眼睛 我发现我的期望一直都是空气 从来没有被知道过!我陷入巨大的悲伤与沉思 但是我很快就明白了 赢得第一并不容易 需要时间和机会
但是我艰险他会回来! 正如他所说的 秀出新的麦蒂!
他是一个雄心勃勃的球员 他的梦想是飞向篮球的高处 那里有着最好的球员 他已经飞向了他的梦想 在他正在飞的时候 他使球迷们为他着迷 尽管我们想要和他一起飞并且帮助他 但是们不能 我们只能在他回来的时候站在他的那边 我们要永远支持他
现在是他人生的路口 我们更希望他的回归 热切期望看到强悍的麦蒂!
作者和我的想法差不多 经历也差不多 都是看35秒13分爱上麦蒂的
我是麦蒂和火箭的忠实铁杆粉丝 支持麦蒂
希望你也支持下麦蒂 祝福他走出低迷 ! 期待麦蒂真正的复出
楼主 这是我打了半小时的成果 你看样子给吧 手都酸死了

下次请别人翻译 要给些悬赏啊
这也是我第一次翻译 希望大家能够指出我的错误~ 谢谢