初中英语作文my ideal job改错Everyone has their own dream job.My father’s jobis sales assistant .A sales assistant sales things to people .My mother’s jobis finance director.A finance director manage the accounters and the finance.My fathe

初中英语作文my ideal job改错Everyone has their own dream job.My father’s jobis sales assistant .A sales assistant sales things to people .My mother’s jobis finance director.A finance director manage the accounters and the finance.My fathe
初中英语作文my ideal job改错
Everyone has their own dream job.
My father’s jobis sales assistant .A sales assistant sales things to people .My mother’s jobis finance director.A finance director manage the accounters and the finance.
My father has done this job fortwenty years.My mother has done this job since she graduated from school.
I don’t wantto do the same job as my parents because I think their jobs are boring.
My dream job is teacher.
I want to do this job because I thinkthis job is meaningful and amusing.I like teaching students and playing withthem.This job can bring me a sense of responsbility.I will be proud of this job.
I will study hard in order to realize the dream.
第二段改成
My father’s job is a sales assistant .A sales assistant sales things to people .My mother’s job is to manage the accountants and the finance.

初中英语作文my ideal job改错Everyone has their own dream job.My father’s jobis sales assistant .A sales assistant sales things to people .My mother’s jobis finance director.A finance director manage the accounters and the finance.My fathe
第一行 their改 his or her
第三行manage 改 manages
第四行 has done不可以一直延续

sales assistant改为bussinsman会更好吧，商人
倒数第三行那个amusing应该是amazing把
段数太多，有些可以合为一段的